by Bismarkey7 » Mon Jan 25, 2010 2:03 am
Beiteynuese Delegation:
"On the issue of Indrala, we propose this compromise: Indrala may send media personnel, and observers from their government. Any media may at any time may be barred from the proceedings that are deemed too secret, and are not allowed to speak during proceedings. Observers from the Indralan government may be present under the same rules and regulations applying to media personnel.
Whether or not the Luthori Empire recognizes Beiteynu as a sovereign nation is its choice. The Beiteynuese Republic certainly recognizes the Holy Luthori Empire as a sovereign nation. However, the Government of the Beiteynuese Republic is the working government of the areas in question, and it does not contain loyalist parties not by suppression, but because the former Loyalist Front has become defunct by its own choice. Also, "Beiteynuese" is the proper demonym for the inhabitants of the areas in question, whether or not "Beiteynu" is the official name of their nation.
As to the bombing of Birahteynu, we accept the fact that you are "sorry" as an apology. We maintain, however, that killing more than 5.5 million innocent civilians a nation considers its vassals is morally repugnant, and that it was not the only way to stop the war as Luthori so claims. Considering the modern and sophisticated times in which we live in, killing innocent civilians is not one of the necessary "horrors of war." Simply because you are not the ones that "caused" the bombing of Birahteynu, does not mean you were not the ones who carried it out. As for your calling the war a rebellion, let it be known that people who fought Luthori in the conflict were not some sort of small separatist group. What happened was that legitimate government of the Kingdom of Yishelem severed ties with the Luthori Empire and restructured itself as a republic. Therefore, whether or not Luthori recognizes this government as independent from them, they must realize it was the working government of the areas in question, with no Luthori control over it. Therefore, since the conflict was between two separate governments, it was, in fact, a war.
But we move away from those technicalities. Your conditions are mostly sensible and very generous, but even so we must make some amendments to them, with the reasons for each amendment given on the respective condition. If there is no amendment, the condition will be written as you had it originally. The article the Beiteynuese delegation believes is most important shall be italicized.
- The official name of the current areas of Yishelem and the Beiteynuese Republic shall be "the Commonwealth of Yishelem & Beiteynu", in which Yishelem refers to the state of Endild, and Beiteynu refers to the remaining other states. Otherwise, its territory shall be the same as what is was before the war. (Reason for amendment: the Kingdom of Yishelem would not be acceptable to the people of the nation, and the Beiteynuese Republic would not be acceptable to the Luthori Empire. Therefore, we propose this compromise, or some similar form.)
-The Luthori Empire shall not intervene in the policies of the Commonwealth of Yishelem & Beiteynu outside of what is explicitly permitted here, meaning that the Commonwealth of Yishelem & Beiteynu will mostly self-rule.
-Luthorian corporations shall not be subject to nationalization by the Commonwealth of Yishelem & Beiteynu.
-The Commonwealth of Yishelem & Beiteynu shall be free to choose its own religion as long as the freedom of worship of Lutherans is respected.
-The inhabitants of the Commonwealth of Yishelem & Beiteynu will be able to implement the government they want in order to take into account the Jewish culture of Yishelem & Beiteynu, as long as William of Rothingren and all His legal descendants, or whoever is deemed to be the rightful Emperor of Luthori, shall be Kings of Yishelem & Beiteynu and the de jure heads of state of Yishelem & Beiteynu. The King shall be represented in the Commonwealth of Yishelem & Beiteynu by a government official officially known as the "Governor-General and Executor of Head of State of the Commonwealth of Yishelem & Beiteynu, Official Representative of HRH King William of Luthori". The governor-general shall act as head of state for King William except in whatever matters in which the King deems to be of importance enough that he shall execute his powers as de jure Head of State of the Commonwealth of Yishelem & Beiteynu. The head of government of the Commonwealth of Yishelem & Beiteynu, whose title may be changed, will be "Prime Minister and Chair of the Parliament of the Commonwealth". The governor-general and prime minister shall both be elected by the citizens of the Commonwealth of Yishelem & Beiteynu, although the King may dismiss these election results and appoint someone to these positions if it is clear one or both of the people elected to the positions advocate, teach, encourage, have attempted, or can reasonably be expected to attempt the overthrow of the King as head of state. (Reason for amendment: The article proposed by the Luthori delegation was not specific enough in the establishment of the sort of viceroy relationship we had agreed upon.)
-The inhabitants of the Commonwealth of Yishelem & Beiteynu shall pay no tax to the Luthori Empire.
-The Commonwealth of Yishelem & Beiteynu and the Holy Luthori Empire will sign a mutual defense treaty, the Holy Imperial Military shall protect the Commonwealth of Yishelem & Beiteynu from all threats. The Commonwealth of Yishelem & Beiteynu will be allowed its own military, but orders from the King will supersede those of all others. (Reason for amendment: We need a military in case of unexpected invasion, to respond quickly to natural disasters, etc.)
-The Commonwealth of Yishelem & Beiteynu may not enter a war of aggression without the consent of its King.
-For legal purposes, the Commonwealth of Yishelem & Beiteynu shall be considered a commonwealth of the Holy Luthori Empire, although this implies no additional power given to Luthori outside of what is explicitly permitted here. (Reason for amendment: "Colony" implies Luthori owns Yishelem, while "commonwealth" has the better implication of togetherness, making Yishelem feel more connected to Luthori.)
-The Commonwealth of Yishelem & Beiteynu may not withdraw from this agreement as long as any and/or all political parties currently in existence there exist; doing so will be considered a declaration of war against Luthori. (Reason for amendment: It's an OOC reason: so players who come after us, who do not know the history, will not unintentionally cause war.)
-In addition to the new treaty which these negotiations will create, the Commonwealth of Yishelem & Beiteynu shall enter the Commonwealth of Nations Alliance, and shall not withdraw from it as long as any and/or all political parties currently in existence there exist. (Reason for amendment: Same as above.)
-In recognition of the damages inflicted on the Yishelem & Beiteynu economy during the rebellion, the Luthori Empire shall transfer a sum of £ 5bn to the treasury of the Commonwealth of Yishelem & Beiteynu, in order to rebuild the country.
-The Emperor and Luthorian government shall use their influence to strongly encourage Luthori corporations to invest in Yishelem & Beiteynu, which shall jump start the agonizing economy. However, whether or not these corporations shall stay in Yishelem & Beiteynu shall be determined by the Commonwealth's attitude towards them (a free market economy will make them stay, a planned economy will make them leave).
-Luthori shall be allowed military bases in Yishelem & Beiteynu, to assure the protection of the King's interest.
We would also like to add another, completely new amendment:
- Whatever is agreed upon by the delegates here at the conference will not become official, legal, and binding in either nation until it is passed unanimously in the respective legislatures of both nations." *
OOC: My commonwealth system is pretty much based on the real-life British Commonwealth. The governor-general will be listed as head of state in the head of state space on the nation profile.
* I am willing to settle for a 3/4 majority.
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